[爆米花]小朋友的第一篇英语作文，请评点。。。。

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我的第一篇英语作文

My friend



    I play with my friend everyday.I’m really happy.In the life,we go home together,and we have the same interests.I’m proud of my friend,my friend is a brain,and she has an open hand.

    She is our monitor.She is in good with my english teacher,she always gets full marks in the English test,because she learns English very hard.

    Her  favourite TV program is CCTV 5,and she has never missed the sport channel,she is absolutely a couch potato.She often hogs the TV.

    She often talks about the future,she dreams to be a English teacher.

    So said,so done.She never gives up.